Tyrawm:Drawn By Tyrawmi Don t Know If This Would Be Better

tyrawm:drawn by tyrawmi don’t know if this would be better if it was just lines… also i hope my handwriting is okay if its hard to read just tell me and i’ll work on the lettering. all of this.
 
Tyrawm:drawn by tyrawmi don t know if this would be better if it was just lines also i hope my handwriting is okay if its hard to read just tell me and i ll work on the lettering. all of this. picture